File "paper-1-m22-responses.html"
Path: /StudyIB/englishalanglit/page/2880/paper-1-m22-responseshtml
File size: 34.72 KB
MIME-type: text/html
Charset: utf-8
<!DOCTYPE html><html lang="EN"><head> <script>(function(w,d,s,l,i){w[l]=w[l]||[];w[l].push({'gtm.start': new Date().getTime(),event:'gtm.js'});var f=d.getElementsByTagName(s)[0], j=d.createElement(s),dl=l!='dataLayer'?'&l='+l:'';j.async=true;j.src= 'https://www.googletagmanager.com/gtm.js?id='+i+dl;f.parentNode.insertBefore(j,f); })(window,document,'script','dataLayer','GTM-PZBWZ8J');</script> <title>Paper 1 - M22 Responses</title><!-- Removed by WebCopy --><!--<base href="/">--><!-- Removed by WebCopy --><meta http-equiv="x-ua-compatible" content="IE=Edge"><meta charset="utf-8"><meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1"><link href="../../../css/bootstrap.flatly.min.css" rel="stylesheet" media="screen"><link rel="stylesheet" href="../../../fonts/awesome/css/font-awesome.min.css"><link href="../../../js/jquery-fancybox/jquery.fancybox.min.css" type="text/css" rel="stylesheet"><link rel="stylesheet" href="../../../css/style.min.css?v=202301301645"><meta name="robots" content="index, follow"><meta name="googlebot" content="noarchive"><meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:title" name="og:title" content="StudyIB English A: Language & Literature: Paper 1 - M22 Responses"> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:image" content="https://studyib.net/img/studyib-card-default.jpg"> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:description" name="og:description" content="This page will provide you not only with authentic examination responses for students taking Paper 1 in M22, but also with examiners' feedback, and a narrated explanation of what the student did well. Examiner how the narrative voice is used..."> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:url" name="og:url" content="https://studyib.net/englishalanglit/page/2880/paper-1-m22-responses"> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:site_name" name="og:site_name" content="StudyIB - Your IB learning companion"> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:locale" name="og:locale" content="en"> <meta prefix="og: http://ogp.me/ns#" property="og:type" name="og:type" content="website"> <meta name="description" content="This page will provide you not only with authentic examination responses for students taking Paper 1 in M22, but also with examiners' feedback, and a narrated explanation of what the student did well. Examiner how the narrative voice is used..."> <meta name="image" content="https://studyib.net/img/studyib-card-default.jpg"> <meta name="keywords" content="Paper 1; assessment; non-literary texts, IB, IBDP, InThinking, International Baccalaureate, Revision, Revision websites, Student Sites, Students, Learning, Guidance, Exam, Questions, Practice problems, Diagnose, Help, Notes"> <meta itemprop="name" content="StudyIB English A: Language & Literature: Paper 1 - M22 Responses"> <meta itemprop="description" content="This page will provide you not only with authentic examination responses for students taking Paper 1 in M22, but also with examiners' feedback, and a narrated explanation of what the student did well. Examiner how the narrative voice is used..."> <meta itemprop="image" content="https://studyib.net/img/studyib-card-default.jpg"> <meta name="twitter:card" content="summary_large_image"> <meta name="twitter:title" content="StudyIB English A: Language & Literature: Paper 1 - M22 Responses"> <meta name="twitter:description" content="This page will provide you not only with authentic examination responses for students taking Paper 1 in M22, but also with examiners' feedback, and a narrated explanation of what the student did well. Examiner how the narrative voice is used..."> <meta name="twitter:image" content="https://studyib.net/img/studyib-card-default.jpg"> <meta name="twitter:creator" content="@inthinker"><link rel="stylesheet" href="../../../css/snippets.min.css?v=202209111300"><link rel="stylesheet" href="../../../css/article.min.css?v=202211221000"><style type="text/css">.filter-sl-only { display: none; }</style><script src="../../../js/ifvisible.min.js"></script><script>ifvisible.setIdleDuration(300);</script><link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="57x57" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-57x57.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="114x114" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-114x114.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="72x72" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-72x72.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="144x144" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-144x144.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="60x60" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-60x60.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="120x120" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-120x120.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="76x76" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-76x76.png"> <link rel="apple-touch-icon-precomposed" sizes="152x152" href="../../../img/favicon/apple-touch-icon-152x152.png"> <link rel="icon" type="image/png" href="../../../img/favicon/favicon-196x196.png" sizes="196x196"> <link rel="icon" type="image/png" href="../../../img/favicon/favicon-96x96.png" sizes="96x96"> <link rel="icon" type="image/png" href="../../../img/favicon/favicon-32x32.png" sizes="32x32"> <link rel="icon" type="image/png" href="../../../img/favicon/favicon-16x16.png" sizes="16x16"> <link rel="icon" type="image/png" href="../../../img/favicon/favicon-128.png" sizes="128x128"> <meta name="application-name" content="StudyIB: Your IB Learning Companion"> <meta name="msapplication-TileColor" content="#A5BED5"> <meta name="msapplication-TileImage" content="/img/favicon/mstile-144x144.png"> <meta name="msapplication-square70x70logo" content="/img/favicon/mstile-70x70.png"> <meta name="msapplication-square150x150logo" content="/img/favicon/mstile-150x150.png"> <meta name="msapplication-wide310x150logo" content="/img/favicon/mstile-310x150.png"> <meta name="msapplication-square310x310logo" content="/img/favicon/mstile-310x310.png"><script>var stdHash = "6da675cbcb3d25f050b05557349abc79", stdTicket = "082b9c9c4ae3624d";</script><script src="../../../js/user/local-stats.min.js?v=202205311700"></script><link href="../../../css/subjects-frontpage.min.css?v=202302031000" rel="stylesheet"></head><body class="public englishalanglit"> <noscript><iframe src="https://www.googletagmanager.com/ns.html?id=GTM-PZBWZ8J" height="0" width="0" style="display:none;visibility:hidden"></iframe></noscript> <div id="top-header"> <div class="wmap general hidden-sm hidden-xs subjects"> <div class="layout-wrapper"> <div class="container-fluid"> <a href=""> <img class="header-thinker" src="../../../img/header-thinker.svg"> </a> <h1> <a href="../../../englishalanglit.html"> <span style="font-family: 'Helvetica Narrow','Arial Narrow',Tahoma,Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;font-stretch: condensed;letter-spacing: -1px">IBDP English A: Language & Literature</span> </a> <a href="https://inthinking.net" title="inthinking.net" class="inthinking-logo pull-right"> <img src="../../../img/header-logo.svg" style="height: 80px; width: auto;"> </a> </h1> <p class="slogan">InThinking Revision Sites for students</p> <p class="author">Website by <strong>Neil Allen</strong></p> <p class="updated">Updated 2 February 2023</p> </div> </div> </div> <nav id="public-topnav" class="navbar navbar-default"> <div class="container-fluid"> <div class="navbar-header"> <a class="navbar-brand hidden-md hidden-lg" href="../../../index.htm"> <img class="header-xs-thinker" src="../../../img/header-thinker.svg"> </a> <button type="button" class="collapsed navbar-toggle" data-toggle="collapse" data-target="#subject-navbar-collapse" aria-expanded="false"> <span class="sr-only">Toggle navigation</span> <i class="fa fa-fw fa-2x fa-user"></i> </button> <div class="brand hidden-lg hidden-md hidden-sm"> <a class="brand-xs" href="../../../englishalanglit.html"> <strong class="title" style="white-space: nowrap;font-size: 18px;">English A: Lang & Lit</strong> </a> </div> </div> <div class="collapse navbar-collapse" id="subject-navbar-collapse"> <ul class="nav navbar-bar navbar-userbox hidden-md hidden-lg"><li class="dropdown"><a href="#" class="dropdown-toggle" data-toggle="dropdown"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-lg fa-user-circle" style="margin-right: 5px;"></i><span style="font-size: 16px;"></span></a><ul class="dropdown-menu"><li class="dropdown-submenu"><a class="dropdown-toggle" href="#" data-toggle="dropdown"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-globe"></i> Subjects</a><ul class="dropdown-menu"><li></li><li class=""><a href="../../../biology.html">DP Biology</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../chemistry.html">DP Chemistry</a></li><li class="active"><a href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-caret-right"></i> DP English A: Language & Literature</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../mathsanalysis.html">DP Maths: Analysis & Approaches</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../mathsapplications.html">DP Maths: Applications & Interpretations SL</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../physics.html">DP Physics</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../spanishb.html">DP Spanish B</a></li></ul></li><li class="menu-item"><a href="../../../user.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-dashboard"></i> Dashboard</a></li><li class="menu-item"><a href="../../../user/profile.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-cog"></i> My profile</a></li><li class="menu-item"><a href="../../../user/messages.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-envelope"></i> Messages</a></li><li class="menu-item hidden-md hidden-lg mt-xs-3"><a href="../../../index.htm?logout=1" class="btn btn-primary btn-xs-block"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-lg fa-power-off text-danger"></i>Log out</a></li></ul></li></ul> <ul class="nav navbar-bar"><li class=""><a class="home" href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-home"></i> Home</a></li><li class=""><a class="topics" href="#"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-th-large"></i> Topics</a></li><li class=""><a class="favorites" href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-star"></i> My favorites</a></li><li class=""><a class="" href="../../blogs.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-paperclip"></i> Blog</a></li><li class=""><a class="sitemap" href="../../sitemap.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-sitemap"></i> Sitemap</a></li><li class=""><a class="activity" href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-calendar-check-o"></i> My activity</a></li></ul> <ul class="nav navbar-bar navbar-right"> <li> <form class="navbar-form hidden-md hidden-lg" role="search" method="get" action="englishalanglit/search"> <div class="input-group"> <input class="form-control nav-search" name="glob" type="search" placeholder="Search..."> <span class="input-group-btn"> <button type="submit" class="btn bg-blue"> <i class="fa fa-search"> </i> </button> </span> </div> </form> <a href="#" class="toggle-menu-search hidden-sm hidden-xs" data-toggle="dropdown"> <i class="fa fa-lg fa-search"></i> </a> </li></ul> </div> </div></nav><nav id="nav-menu-search" class="shadow-bottom hidden-sm hidden-xs" style="display: none;"> <div class="container-fluid"> <form class="" role="search" method="get" action="englishalanglit/search"> <input class="form-control nav-search" name="glob" type="search" placeholder="Search English A: Lang & Lit..."> <button class="btn btn-sm btn-primary" type="submit"> Search </button> </form> </div></nav><div class="modal fade" tabindex="-1" role="dialog" id="modal-mini-login"> <div class="modal-dialog" role="document"> <div class="modal-content"> <div class="modal-body"> <button aria-hidden="true" data-dismiss="modal" class="close hidden-xs login-button-close" type="button">×</button> <form method="post"> <div class="form-group"> <input name="user-email" class="form-control" type="text" placeholder="Email"> </div> <div class="form-group"> <input name="user-password" class="form-control" type="password" placeholder="Password"> <input name="user-fp" class="fp" value="d8c893da5db7501669ffeeac46273ba6" type="hidden"> </div> <div class="form-group"> <a href="../../../reset-password.html" class="reset-password" style="font-weight: normal;"> Forgot your password? </a> </div> <div class="form-group"> <button type="submit" name="submit-login" value="1" class="btn btn-primary btn-block text-center"> <i class="fa fa-user fa-fw"></i> Log in </button> </div> </form> </div> </div> </div></div></div><div class="modal fade" id="show-topics" tabindex="-1" role="dialog"><div id="dialog-topics" class="modal-dialog modal-dialog-topics"><div class="modal-content"><div class="modal-body modal-body-topics"><div id="new-frontpage-toplevels-topics" class="frontpage-box"><div class="row"><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../3009/free-access-weekend.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Free Access Weekend!</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/4th-of-july-min.jpg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../2897/p1-examination-questions.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">P1 - Examination Questions</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/distinction.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../2917/p2-examination-questions.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">P2 - Examination Questions</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/distinction.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../699/start-here.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Start Here</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/welcome-on-board.jpg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../700/paper-1.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Paper 1</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/writing-exams-1.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../701/paper-2.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Paper 2</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/writing-exams-2.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../702/individual-oral.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Individual Oral</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/individual-oral.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../703/hl-essay.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">HL Essay</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/essay.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../2409/the-learner-portfolio.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">The Learner Portfolio</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('/media/englishalanglit/reflection..jpg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../704/extended-essay.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Extended Essay</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/books.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../2408/essential-knowledge.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Essential Knowledge</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('/media/englishalanglit/images/finals-for-comp-6-min.jpg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div><div class="col-md-4 col-sm-4"><div class="item"><a href="../707/resources.html"><div class="header" style="height: 35px;"><h3 class="title special" style="margin-top: 0;">Resources</h3></div><div class="body"><div class="cropper" style="background-image: url('../../images/resources-2.jpeg'); height: 10vw;"></div></div></a></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><div class="container-fluid shadow-ith"><div class="row frontpage"> <div class="col-md-3" id="left-column"> <p class="visible-xs-block"></p><div class="dropdown user-menu hidden-xs" style="margin-bottom: 20px;"> <button type="button" class="btn btn-default dropdown-toggle" data-toggle="dropdown" style="border-radius: 0; padding: 6px 18px;"> <i class="fa fa-fw fa-user-circle"></i> <small><i class="fa fa-caret-down"></i></small> </button> <ul class="dropdown-menu"> <li class="dropdown-submenu"><a href="#"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-globe"></i> Subjects</a><ul id="user-subjects-menu" class="dropdown-menu"><li></li><li class=""><a href="../../../biology.html">DP Biology</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../chemistry.html">DP Chemistry</a></li><li class="active"><a href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-caret-right"></i> DP English A: Language & Literature</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../mathsanalysis.html">DP Maths: Analysis & Approaches</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../mathsapplications.html">DP Maths: Applications & Interpretations SL</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../physics.html">DP Physics</a></li><li class=""><a href="../../../spanishb.html">DP Spanish B</a></li></ul></li><li class="divider"></li><li><a href="../../../user.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-dashboard"></i> Dashboard</a></li><li><a href="../../../user/profile.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-cog"></i> My profile</a></li><li><a href="../../../user/messages.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-envelope"></i> Messages</a></li> <li class="divider"></li> <li> <a href="../../../index.htm?logout=1"> <i class="fa fa-fw fa-power-off"></i> Log out </a> </li> </ul></div> <div id="side-nav"><h4 class="side-nav-title dropdown"><a href="../2897/p1-examination-questions.html" class="dropdown-toggle toplevel-dropdown" data-toggle="dropdown"><i class="fa fa-ellipsis-v"></i></a> <a href="../2897/p1-examination-questions.html">P1 - Examination Questions</a><ul class="dropdown-menu"><li><a href="../../../englishalanglit.html" style="padding-left: 5px; border-bottom: solid 1px #ddd"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-home"></i> Home</a></li><li><a href="../3009/free-access-weekend.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Free Access Weekend!</a></li><li><a href="../2917/p2-examination-questions.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> P2 - Examination Questions</a></li><li><a href="../699/start-here.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Start Here</a></li><li><a href="../700/paper-1.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Paper 1</a></li><li><a href="../701/paper-2.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Paper 2</a></li><li><a href="../702/individual-oral.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Individual Oral</a></li><li><a href="../703/hl-essay.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> HL Essay</a></li><li><a href="../2409/the-learner-portfolio.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> The Learner Portfolio</a></li><li><a href="../704/extended-essay.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Extended Essay</a></li><li><a href="../2408/essential-knowledge.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Essential Knowledge</a></li><li><a href="../707/resources.html"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-caret-right"></i> Resources</a></li></ul><div class="pull-right"><a class="sidenav-expand" title="Expand all" href="#"><i class="fa fa-plus-circle"></i></a> <a class="sidenav-compress" title="Compress all" href="#"><i class="fa fa-minus-circle"></i></a></div></h4><ul class="side-nav level-0"><li class=""><label style="padding-left: 0px"><i class="fa fa-fw"></i><a href="../2879/paper-1-examination-questions.html">Paper 1 - Examination Questions</a></label></li><li class="expanded parent selected"><label style="padding-left: 0px"><i class="fa fa-fw"></i><a href="paper-1-m22-responses.html">Paper 1 - M22 Responses</a></label></li><li class=""><label style="padding-left: 0px"><i class="fa fa-fw"></i><a href="../2419/paper-1-m21-responses.html">Paper 1 - M21 Responses</a></label></li></ul></div> <div class="hidden-xs hidden-sm"> <button class="btn btn-default btn-block text-xs-center" data-toggle="modal" data-target="#modal-feedback" style="margin-bottom: 10px"><i class="fa fa-send"></i> Feedback</button> </div> </div> <div class="col-md-9" id="main-column"> <h1 class="page_title"> Paper 1 - M22 Responses <a href="#" class="mark-page-favorite pull-right" data-pid="2880" title="Mark as favorite" onclick="return false;"><i class="fa fa-star-o"></i></a> </h1> <ol class="breadcrumb"> <li><a href="../../../englishalanglit.html"><i class="fa fa-home"></i></a><i class="fa fa-fw fa-chevron-right divider"></i></li><li><a href="../2897/p1-examination-questions.html">P1 - Examination Questions</a><i class="fa fa-fw fa-chevron-right divider"></i></li><li><span class="gray">Paper 1 - M22 Responses</span></li> <span class="pull-right" style="color: #555" title="Suggested study time: 30 minutes"><i class="fa fa-clock-o"></i> 30'</span> </ol> <article id="main-article"> <div class="intro-card img-right" readonly="false"><img class="intro-image" readonly="true" src="../../images/delete-me-after-this-session/text-analysis-834x720-1.png"> <div class="content" readonly="true"> <p class="text">This page will provide you not only with authentic examination responses for students taking Paper 1 in M22, but also with examiners' feedback, and a narrated explanation of what the student did well.</p> </div> </div> <div class="militia"> <h3>M22 Paper 1 Response #2 - Text #2</h3> <p><strong>Examiner how the narrative voice is used in this text to create a sense of immediacy whilst also attempting to involve the reader.</strong></p> <button class="btn btn-xs bg-turquoise showhider"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-plus"></i></button><section class="hiddenbox hidden"> <p><meta charset="utf-8"></p> <p dir="ltr"><b id="docs-internal-guid-e5f9d6c8-7fff-db6b-3b00-5c7621863708">Travelling the world and experiencing new places can render one’s mind a melting pot of emotions and new impressions of multi-faceted nature. This blog entry represents a journalist’s account of her journey from Tran to Harmanli in Bulgaria, which depicts her impressions of the voyage. Through the use of the eternal present tense, a hint of humour and varied syntax, the first-person narrative voice in this text is employed to contrive a sense of immediacy whilst also attempting to involve the reader.</b></p> <p dir="ltr"><b id="docs-internal-guid-e5f9d6c8-7fff-db6b-3b00-5c7621863708">Firstly, the author utilises light and at times tongue-in-cheek humour to depict her inner reflection process and hence allow the audience to engage with her impressions. Through the juxtaposition of the diction ‘intriguingly’ and the phrase ‘an experience I still have flashbacks about today’ epitomises the use of contrasting tones to contradict the audience’s expectations and hence create humour. The diction ‘intriguingly’ entails a slightly positive undertone and a sense of curiosity, which is disrupted by the negative connotation of the diction ‘troubling’. In the context of this blog entry, the slightly dramatic use of the word ‘troubling’ is hence employed to establish humour, thus attempting to involve the reader in the experience on a sensual level. The author’s use of humour is furthermore evident in the question, ‘Are they some kind of cycle-obsessed sadomasochists?’ The use of ‘sadomasochists’ creates a hyperbolic effect in the context of a young family with a ‘newborn baby’, which not only characterises the mayhem of the setting in a vivid manner, but also provides the audience with a clear differentiation between descriptions and the inner impressions of the first-person narrator. This provides the audience with an understanding of both literal occurrences as well as associated emotions to immerse them in the situation in an attempt to achieve personal involvement.</b></p> <p dir="ltr"><b id="docs-internal-guid-e5f9d6c8-7fff-db6b-3b00-5c7621863708">Furthermore, the writer consistently utilises the eternal present tense in their first-person narration of the occurrence to create a sense of immediacy and hence prevent a disconnect between the audience and the account of their journey through the element of time. The author asserts that their first day in Bulgaria ‘doesn’t bode well’ and that ‘the sky is black and buckets of rain thump down outside my window’, which creates a sense of continuity and consistency. Rather than depicting the situation through the use of a flashback, the audience is directly immersed in the moment, and the account of the author appears unaffected by time. The frequent repetition of the first-person singular pronoun emphasises the fact that the writer’s account is a present state of being. For example, ‘I spend an exhilarating 20 minutes wrapping all my electrical equipment’ juxtaposed with ‘I venture back in’ again supports the sense of time passing, which involves the audience in the direct process of the occurrence. The use of the present tense moreover underlines the writer’s central synthesis at the very end of the extract, namely that ‘the country exists in an almost state of unresolved ambiguity’.</b></p> <p dir="ltr"><b id="docs-internal-guid-e5f9d6c8-7fff-db6b-3b00-5c7621863708">Moreover, the author juxtaposes contrasting lexical fields of positivity and negativity to strengthen the first-person narrative voice within vivid imagery, thus enhancing the depiction of their personal perspective. The semantic field of misery, including diction such as ‘miserable’, ‘sluggishly’ and ‘oily’ is contrasted with the lexical field of positivity in the second part of the extract, which includes diction such as ‘sweet’ and ‘gentle’. This conveys the writer’s multi-faceted impressions of her journey, showing that the account reflects her raw reflections of the moment, thus creating a sense of immediacy. The fact that her impressions entail a range of emotions show that time hasn’t yet altered them into a singular opinion, thus buttressing this sense of immediacy.</b></p> <p dir="ltr"><b id="docs-internal-guid-e5f9d6c8-7fff-db6b-3b00-5c7621863708">In conclusion, this text uses a first-person narrative voice combined with the use of the eternal present tense, humour and contrasting lexical fields to convey their raw impressions of the journey in a vivid and unaltered manner. This immerses the reader in the moment, in an attempt to engage it and create a sense of immediacy.</b></p> </section> <h3> </h3> <h3>Examiner's marks</h3> <button class="btn btn-xs bg-turquoise showhider"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-plus"></i></button><section class="hiddenbox hidden"> <p>A: 5</p> <p>B: 4</p> <p>C: 4</p> <p>D: 5</p> </section> <h3> </h3> <h3>Narrated discussion of student response</h3> <p><iframe allowfullscreen="" frameborder="0" height="480" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/aE9l0h69U_Q?rel=0" width="640"></iframe></p> </div> <div class="page-container panel-self-assessment" data-id="2880"> <div class="panel-heading">MY PROGRESS</div> <div class="panel-body understanding-rate"> <div class="msg"></div> <label class="label-lg">Self-assessment</label><p>How much of <strong>Paper 1 - M22 Responses</strong> have you understood?</p><div class="slider-container text-center"><div id="self-assessment-slider" class="sib-slider self-assessment " data-value="1" data-percentage=""></div></div> <label class="label-lg">My notes</label> <textarea name="page-notes" class="form-control" rows="3" placeholder="Write your notes here..."></textarea> </div> <div class="panel-footer text-xs-center"> <span id="last-edited" class="mb-xs-3"> </span> <div class="actions mt-xs-3"> <button id="save-my-progress" type="button" class="btn btn-sm btn-primary text-center btn-xs-block"> <i class="fa fa-fw fa-floppy-o"></i> Save </button> </div> </div></div> <div id="modal-feedback" class="modal fade" tabindex="-1" role="dialog"> <div class="modal-dialog" role="document"> <div class="modal-content"> <div class="modal-header"> <h4 class="modal-title">Feedback</h4> <button type="button" class="close hidden-xs hidden-sm" data-dismiss="modal" aria-label="Close"> <span aria-hidden="true">×</span> </button> </div> <div class="modal-body"> <div class="errors"></div> <p><strong>Which of the following best describes your feedback?</strong></p> <form method="post" style="overflow: hidden"> <div class="form-group"> <div class="radio"><label style="color: #121212;"><input type="radio" name="feedback-type" value="Recommendation"> Recommend</label></div><div class="radio"><label style="color: #121212;"><input type="radio" name="feedback-type" value="Problem"> Report a problem</label></div><div class="radio"><label style="color: #121212;"><input type="radio" name="feedback-type" value="Improvement"> Suggest an improvement</label></div><div class="radio"><label style="color: #121212;"><input type="radio" name="feedback-type" value="Other"> Other</label></div> </div> <hr> <div class="row"> <div class="col-md-6"> <div class="form-group"> <label for="feedback-name">Name</label> <input type="text" class="form-control" name="feedback-name" placeholder="Name" value=" "> </div> </div> <div class="col-md-6"> <div class="form-group"> <label for="feedback-email">Email address</label> <input type="email" class="form-control" name="feedback-email" placeholder="Email" value="@airmail.cc"> </div> </div> </div> <div class="form-group"> <label for="feedback-comments">Comments</label> <textarea class="form-control" name="feedback-comments" style="resize: vertical;"></textarea> </div> <input type="hidden" name="feedback-ticket" value="082b9c9c4ae3624d"> <input type="hidden" name="feedback-url" value="https://studyib.net/englishalanglit/page/2880/paper-1-m22-responses"> <input type="hidden" name="feedback-subject" value="13"> <input type="hidden" name="feedback-subject-name" value="English A: Language & Literature"> <div class="pull-left"> </div> </form> </div> <div class="modal-footer"> <button type="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-xs-block feedback-submit mb-xs-3 pull-right"> <i class="fa fa-send"></i> Send </button> <button type="button" class="btn btn-default btn-xs-block m-xs-0 pull-left" data-dismiss="modal"> Close </button> </div> </div> </div></div> </article> <hr class="hidden-md hidden-lg"> <div class="hidden-md hidden-lg mt-xs-3"> <button class="btn btn-default btn-block text-xs-center" data-toggle="modal" data-target="#modal-feedback" style="margin-bottom: 10px"><i class="fa fa-send"></i> Feedback</button> </div> </div> <input type="hidden" id="user-id" value="38342"></div><input id="ticket" type="hidden" value="082b9c9c4ae3624d"><input id="tzoffset" type="hidden" value="new"><input id="fp" class="fp" type="hidden" value=""></div><div id="std-footer"> <div class="wmap"> <div class="layout-wrapper"> <p> <a href="https://www.inthinking.net"> © <span id="footer-year"></span> <em>InThinking</em> <script>document.getElementById("footer-year").innerHTML = new Date().getFullYear();</script> </a> | <a target="_self" href="../../../about.html"> About us </a> | <a target="_self" href="../../../terms-and-conditions.html"> Legal </a> | <a target="_self" href="../../../contact.html"> Contact </a> </p> <p> <a class="social" target="_blank" href="https://twitter.com/#!/inthinker"> <img src="../../../img/social/twitter-square.svg"> Twitter </a> <a class="social" target="_blank" href="https://www.facebook.com/inthinking.net"> <img src="../../../img/social/facebook-square.svg"> Facebook </a> <a class="social" target="_blank" href="https://www.linkedin.com/profile/view?id=139741989"> <img src="../../../img/social/linkedin-square.svg"> LinkedIn </a> </p> </div> </div></div><script src="../../../js/jquery-1.11.3.min.js"></script><script src="../../../js/bootstrap.min.js"></script><script src="../../../js/jquery-fancybox/jquery.fancybox.min.js"></script><script>var pageId = 2880;</script><script type="text/javascript" src="../../../js/jqueryui/jquery-ui.min.js"></script><script type="text/javascript" src="../../../js/jqueryui/jquery.ui.touch-punch.min.js"></script><script src="../../../js/user/page-my-progress.min.js?v=202211221000"></script><script>var sAJAX='/pages/subjects/activity/user-stats-page.php?t=082b9c9c4ae3624d&p=2880&s=13&x=1193';var sData='k4iA6GSB03BgPm14wdlAIxiA6GSB0bfq7Y9FwFiA6GSBPFAF7YcHEKvrZ0fREzP5PBps7YK4PdulIzpaOmPl9nKD7Yv273KDPFAF7YcHEKvr6GSDPmjn6GyDEzAFWGcrE0ij6GyDPmjn6GyDEzAF7bKFEYv86GB2Pm1FPFAF7YcrZxP5PBAhEGqHWYBDZYcR6GqHWYBr0xvA6GSB0xX4wdlA0xvA60pB7FryIGr4OFL4E0aAW3qDE0OFeC==';var loopSecs = 30;var minSecsLog = 60;var lsKey = '13-83607-2880';</script><script src="../../../js/subjects/activity/user-stats-page.min.js?v=202205311700"></script><script src="../../../js/subjects/activity/my-favorites.min.js?v=20220610"></script><script src="../../../js/subjects/feedback.min.js?v=202211221000"></script><script>var sessionUpdateSecs = 300;</script><script type="text/javascript" src="../../../js/session-updater.js"></script><script>(function(i,s,o,g,r,a,m){i['GoogleAnalyticsObject']=r;i[r]=i[r]||function(){(i[r].q=i[r].q||[]).push(arguments)},i[r].l=1*new Date();a=s.createElement(o),m=s.getElementsByTagName(o)[0];a.async=1;a.src=g;m.parentNode.insertBefore(a,m)})(window,document,'script','https://www.google-analytics.com/analytics.js','ga');ga('create', 'UA-98480796-1', 'auto');ga('send', 'pageview');</script><script src="../../../js/devicefp/devicefp.min.js"></script><script src="../../../js/jq-quickfit/jq-quickfit.min.js?v=20220201"></script><script src="../../../js/frontpage-subjects.min.js?v=202211161300"></script><script type="text/javascript" src="../../../js/studyib-jq.min.js?v=202211241300"></script><script type="text/javascript">$(document).ready(function(){ $('#trigger-modal-video-overview').click(function() { if( $('#modal-video-overview .modal-body iframe').attr('src').length == 0 ) { $('#modal-video-overview .modal-body iframe').attr('src', 'https://www.youtube.com/embed/hxxtdiLdTFk?rel=0'); } }); $('#modal-video-overview').on('hidden.bs.modal', function() { $('#modal-video-overview .modal-body iframe').attr('src', ''); }); });</script></body></html>